Kyra Pelstring
Eng 102
Febuary 2nd 2015
Wanting
to have a criminology degree when you’re older took a lot more writing
experience than I thought. I know coming into college you might think
there’s a lot of writing pieces in general; which there is, but have you
ever thought about the different type of writing pieces you might
actually have to writing? Informational, persuasive, academic,
nonacademic, scholarly? When I was picking this major I was thinking
there would be a lot of research and statistic type papers. I
interviewed 2 professors and a graduate student.
I had a very
good face to face interview with a graduate student from the University
of Louisville that I’m going to mainly talk about. She majored in
criminology just like me. I asked her a few questions that persuaded her
writing experience. I asked first the main question “what type of
writing pieces do you write overall”. Between her and the other
professors I talked to they came back with very excellent responses.
There Reponses and what type of papers they write are similar to what I
had in mine. They write academic informational research papers and
summary papers. Usually under the department of sociology or
criminology.
I also asked the graduated student what kind of
format she usually wrote her papers in and she replied with “most of the
time APA”. All of my life I have pretty much wrote MLA format and I’m
sure most of you high school students do the same, but there’s never a
hard adjustment in the two. She mentioned also how you list or bulletin
in most of your papers trying to get your information across.
An
essay that I found from online I used to compare to some of the essay
you would be writing if you were trying to be in the criminology major.
One was a scholarly, I used
http://umm.edu/health/medical/reports/articles/stress . It was a
academic based research. In the article it didn’t have any pictures and
was more bullet with main factors and results. It wasn’t biased and was
straight to the point. It had research database just like if were
writing a paper for criminology major. There are also other options
though
Another was a summary article I found; it was non academic,
http://psycnet.apa.org/journals/bul/98/2/310/ . They have straight to
the point of what there trying to say. They cite all there information
at the top of their page in APA format. In the article it says “(1)
whether a measure assesses support structure (the existence of
relationships) or function (the extent to which one's interpersonal
relationships provide particular resources) and (2) the degree of
specificity (vs globality) of the scale. Special attention is given to
methodological characteristics that are requisite for a fair comparison
of the models.” They use a away off talking about what they want to say
by making a number list and putting information in parentheses.
Academic
sources and scholarly sources are very similar but scholarly sources
are a peer reviewed academic sources. If you’re going to be end up going
into the same major I set myself to go into you will mainly be using a
lot of academic research papers.
"Stress, Social Support, and the Buffering Hypothesis." APA PsycNET. N.p., n.d. Web. 02 Feb. 2015.”
"Stress." University of Maryland Medical Center. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Feb. 2015.”
My overall impression of your info report is that it has a good base. You made it easy to understand what you are trying to talk about. I feel like it could be more detailed and try making it flow better. Make it more about the audience you are talking to and try taking out your personal feelings about the writing because I think that the book says something about not using personal feelings on informational reports.
ReplyDeleteWhat I would suggest is to narrow down your thesis, it did not make an argument or claim towards what you are discussing. Add in more transitions at the beginning of your sentences to make it flow better paragraph by paragraph.With the sources you already have I feel like you can add in more evidence to back up what you are saying, the sentences are a little broad and I feel like you could get more facts in there and add some more flavor to the paragraphs that way.
Even though I understand what you are talking about I feel like for the audience the background of what you are talking about is a little broad as well. But adding in more detail and facts will definitely help make it less like that.